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Topic: Whispers
Neelam Joined Fri 07/15/22 Posts: 16	Sat 07/16/22 12:44 AM
I think you called my name, A slight whisper, A shivering tone, Yet it doesn't feel same.. A ghost of memory, A moment left in past, When decision made, Future too difficult to see.. And yet again, Over the last few weeks, I am hearing, A longing filled with pain.. Maybe I am going insane, Yet my hearing is sharp, I know it's true, Your whisper sweet like, Music in the falling rain, I am hearing once again..

Unknow Joined Sat 07/10/21 Posts: 54503	Sat 07/16/22 01:07 AM
NICE

Laska Paul Joined Sun 11/08/20 Posts: 22880	Sat 07/16/22 02:29 AM
I think you called my name, A slight whisper, A shivering tone, Yet it doesn't feel same.. A ghost of memory, A moment left in past, When decision made, Future too difficult to see.. And yet again, Over the last few weeks, I am hearing, A longing filled with pain.. Maybe I am going insane, Yet my hearing is sharp, I know it's true, Your whisper sweet like, Music in the falling rain, I am hearing once again.. Its actually really beneficial for aspiring writers to take part on this platform and post their poems to accelerate their inborn talents. Furthermore, I would request Mingle2 Team to give away exciting cash prizes for the best Poems posted . I repeat , Its only my suggestion ( ha ha haa ) . As a Reader, I'm satisfied , It's Okay , I don't know about others .I think!!! Rhyming could have been made much better. That's All.....

JulieABush Joined Thu 01/26/17 Posts: 3442	Sat 07/16/22 03:16 AM
Nice poem .

Neelam Joined Fri 07/15/22 Posts: 16	Sat 07/16/22 07:09 PM
Thank you everyone :-)

Leah Joined Tue 04/12/22 Posts: 9839	Sat 07/16/22 07:16 PM
I really resonate with that. Touching. I loved it.

Neelam Joined Fri 07/15/22 Posts: 16	Sun 07/17/22 03:11 PM
I really resonate with that. Touching. I loved it. Thank you :-)

anie Joined Sun 06/05/22 Posts: 147	Sun 07/17/22 03:23 PM
a longing filled with pain nice

Aatheera Joined Sat 01/29/22 Posts: 7161	Sun 07/17/22 07:36 PM
As always, a kindling version which I relished ❤ Wish I could read them more

Neelam Joined Fri 07/15/22 Posts: 16	Sun 07/17/22 09:58 PM
a longing filled with pain nice Thank you :-)

Neelam Joined Fri 07/15/22 Posts: 16	Sun 07/17/22 09:58 PM
As always, a kindling version which I relished ❤ Wish I could read them more Thank you but I like your poems more :-)

Aatheera Joined Sat 01/29/22 Posts: 7161	Mon 07/18/22 01:09 AM
Thank you but I like your poems more :-) Thankyou it means alot for me ❤

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