Topic: Unknown!!
Aatheera's photo
Wed 02/23/22 09:55 PM
As I walked through the pathway of the Church that I visited last time,
Everything looked the same as before,
Cold Walls were same as before!
Tall pillars were same as before!
Coloured flowers remained fresh as before!
Flowers were arranged in the same order as before!

As I knelt down and closed my eyes,
I remembered the prayers I made as a covenant during last time,
It was in the same Church, I surrendered those precious loved ones to the Creator last time!

I felt that I was a known person that time for those precious loved ones,
Tears were not filling my eyes,
Neither words nor any prayers I could say,
Felt my eyes and heart were blank!
Realised that my love for those precious ones remained the same but just that I turned as an Unknown for them now!

As I stared the eyes of the Creator in the Altar,
Felt those eyes were looking at me as same as before,
Felt those eyes were holding the same love as before,
Felt a glimpse of that thought,
It then brought a tear,
It then made me say a word of thanks to the Creator,
Though I became an unknown for those loved ones,
My Creator still recognised me as a known one!

Holding that message, I came outside the same church and touched the same old tree which stood near the entrance,
The tree looked known to me,
I touched the tree with my cold hands and felt it recognised me,
I felt known to all the trees and the plants around the Church!

..................,
Being Known or Unknown for our loved ones might keep changing,
But we cannot become an UNKNOWN to Our Creator nor to the Constant Wild Nature!

Changes cannot be trapped in cages,
And whatever remains constant also cannot stay trapped inside cages!

Peaceful we would be,
If we understand the love from those who never change!
-Aatheera

no photo
Wed 02/23/22 11:25 PM
N:cherry_blossom:I:cherry_blossom:C:cherry_blossom:E

Life is full of Blessings
Sometimes we don't know it.
....Unknown

Know:pray:Own

Vibes's photo
Wed 02/23/22 11:28 PM
Poem Titled unknown
From a poet well-known
Describing the known unknown
Definitely unabated
Truth unravelled
Nicely scribed!

Constant things never change
Confusion stays ever within
Good things always remain
God's mercy always stay
Get along the nature n Creator
Goes everything well n good.

JulieABush's photo
Thu 02/24/22 03:12 AM
Nice:thumbsup: :wink: .

Aatheera's photo
Thu 02/24/22 10:01 AM
N:cherry_blossom:I:cherry_blossom:C:cherry_blossom:E

Life is full of Blessings
Sometimes we don't know it.
....Unknown

Know:pray:Own

Thankyou.

Aatheera's photo
Thu 02/24/22 10:02 AM
Nice:thumbsup: :wink: .

Thankyou Julie :rose:

Aatheera's photo
Thu 02/24/22 10:04 AM
Poem Titled unknown
From a poet well-known
Describing the known unknown
Definitely unabated
Truth unravelled
Nicely scribed!

Constant things never change
Confusion stays ever within
Good things always remain
God's mercy always stay
Get along the nature n Creator
Goes everything well n good.

Thankyou Vibes, your line 'God's mercy always stay' brought peace to the ever tired soul,

Mjane's photo
Thu 02/24/22 07:12 PM
:heart:nice:slight_smile::heart::heart: full of blessings full of surprise...

Aatheera's photo
Thu 02/24/22 09:20 PM
Life full of blessings and surprised

Hello Mjane ❤ Happy to know that you liked it and yes, your presence here also gave me a pleasant surprise as I logged in :blush: Thankyou for bringing in exciting vibes, have wonderful times :rose:

Laska Paul 's photo
Fri 02/25/22 02:24 AM


Nice to see you writing again .
Poetry is a Beautiful thing when understood with all the metaphors and personifications. You have a great beginning and a Perfect ending . That is what, matters ALOT....

Aatheera's photo
Fri 02/25/22 04:49 AM
Nice to see you writing again .
Poetry is a Beautiful thing when understood with all the metaphors and personifications. You have a great beginning and a Perfect ending . That is what, matters ALOT....

Thankyou Paul for those motivational words, have wonderful times ahead,

Laska Paul 's photo
Fri 02/25/22 05:21 AM

Nice to see you writing again .
Poetry is a Beautiful thing when understood with all the metaphors and personifications. You have a great beginning and a Perfect ending . That is what, matters ALOT....

Thankyou Paul for those motivational words, have wonderful times ahead,


Its OKAY! Nothing more to say , But do keep Writing .
There is a saying in French : Appear Weak when you are STRONG and STRONG when you are Weak.

Aatheera's photo
Fri 02/25/22 10:22 AM
Its OKAY! Nothing more to say , But do keep Writing .
There is a saying in French : Appear Weak when you are STRONG and STRONG when you are Weak.

Nothing gets me weak as long as I am in my Creator's eyes, have a great weekend :pizza::house::tada:

Laska Paul 's photo
Sat 02/26/22 08:09 AM


May your Week End be as Beautiful as your Thoughts are.
A Sunday Well Spent bring a Week of Content .H W E