Where are you?
why you left me?
where I can find you?
When we can meet again?
Lots of question within me
- but am still with you -

Your presence is not there
your fragrance is not there
your smile is not there
- but am still with you -

Am lonely in the planet but
am still with you

Nice poem .

Poetry Writing is not an Easy Task . It should have precision , flow , Creative , Rhyming and Framing . But that does not mean Your Poetry is Bad . There are many Poets here who writes from within the Heart . While reading their poems, it takes us to Disneyland, sorry Fantasy Land.
As a reader I am happy though your Poetry is too short. And as Part of encouragement I will give you 7/10 on scale . You lost 3 marks bcoz your Poetry is too short plus the Topic could have been Simple Yet Sweet .
Hope we all can read a lot from you in the Near Future.
Thank You .. This is Laska Paul .

Thank you

Thank you Mr. Laska Paul - Am not a big writer of poems - thanks for your encouragement sure will write a big poem in near future . Thanks a lot

I can't understand Ms. Lessi

NICE

Loneliness is my best friend.
I don't expect from any.
That's the reason of Happiness..