Topic: Little things
velbar's photo
Wed 10/20/21 12:04 PM
Little things
 
Say words that need to be said
cry tears that need to be shed
if you leave these undone...
only bitterness will be harvested
do things that need to be done
give smiles wherever you can
remember the river of life has no re-run
show gratitude in multitude
give thanks where it is due
shower love to everyone around
last but not least, please is a feast
principles for free to practice easy
little things precious and rare
all that needs to be done, is share
so share and show that you care

velbar

Aatheera's photo
Wed 10/20/21 12:33 PM
Love it ❤

JulieABush's photo
Wed 10/20/21 01:45 PM
Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .

no photo
Wed 10/20/21 05:44 PM
:thumbsup: Sounds like a heart felt truth of life! Excellent.

Laska Paul 's photo
Thu 10/21/21 02:35 AM

Little things
 
Say words that need to be said
cry tears that need to be shed
if you leave these undone...
only bitterness will be harvested
do things that need to be done
give smiles wherever you can
remember the river of life has no re-run
show gratitude in multitude
give thanks where it is due
shower love to everyone around
last but not least, please is a feast
principles for free to practice easy
little things precious and rare
all that needs to be done, is share
so share and show that you care

velbar

There is no Point in saying a poem is bad becoz you dont' Understand it . Most often it is eazzzy to understand when the Poet has shaped the craft to skill beyond the group of Words in a Specific and Systematic format.
How ever I would say ""Praise"" is an Important Facet of a GOOD POETRY.





no photo
Sat 10/30/21 10:25 AM
This can prevent a lot of troubles in the world

Watch's photo
Mon 01/03/22 02:11 AM
Little things
 
Say words that need to be said
cry tears that need to be shed
if you leave these undone...
only bitterness will be harvested
do things that need to be done
give smiles wherever you can
remember the river of life has no re-run
show gratitude in multitude
give thanks where it is due
shower love to everyone around
last but not least, please is a feast
principles for free to practice easy
little things precious and rare
all that needs to be done, is share
so share and show that you care

velbar

thank you

Vibes's photo
Mon 01/03/22 05:41 AM

When one remember
Ways to live ever
What life gives over
Will fail never!

Words I wondered
Worthfully rendered
Nice Velbar