Help improve it

Start again I think.

You need better pics for a start. Remove the one with the mask on. What purpose does it serve??

No one is interested in your KIK ID so remove that too. You made a profile on THIS site yet you want everyone to go to another site

You want to know everyone else’s details but don’t provide any details of your own!

Have a look through other threads in this forum for help, ideas and hints for better profiles.

Good luck.

The pictures are pretty good. None are smiling, but they're clear enough, and you seem like a good-looking guy. The 'About' section uses "your" where you probably meant "you're" (or "you are") which is a pet peeve of mine, but the meaning is clear enough. Just doesn't make you look smart. Maybe you're going for a hip/cool angle, there. Style!

Anyway, it's short and easy to read, and you included your interests. so, overall, a pretty good job. For the thoughtful and brief text, with minor errors, fairly complete info and good pics, I rate it 8/10.

Good luck!