Topic: Self-Motivating Muse
Gemini44's photo
Wed 12/26/07 10:09 PM
Images dancing across the canvas of the mind
Memories embellished into intoxicating daydreams
That envelop the imagination
And force its aperture to widen

A picture show of flooding flashes:
Fingertips gliding on his skin
Lips lightly moisten the neck
Thighs brush against each other flirtatiously

The eyes are blinded from the true
And drown in the inviting creation
The body is persuaded to follow the vision
And adds to the spectacle as the whole is submerged

A shiver of tiny bumps become visible on the skin
A dampness between the legs radiates warmth
Breaths and beats become erratic and robust
A rush of elation complementing body to brain

There is no desire for egress
Drowning never seemed so irresistible.
A sound or similar distraction shatters the illusion
Reality rapes the mind
The eyelids open; the curtains close.


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Dedicated to my muse, Lex

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Wed 12/26/07 10:31 PM
Wow, I'm speechless....

Absolutely beautiful....

Thank you....

[I wish I could write poetry that well!]

I love you, sweetie....!!

:heart: :heart: :heart:

flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

sealove42's photo
Wed 12/26/07 10:33 PM
Where do you think it came from... That was special...it said a lot...

s1owhand's photo
Thu 12/27/07 05:12 AM
bigsmile

Differentkindofwench's photo
Thu 12/27/07 05:28 AM
This is good, not too bam in your face and not too obscure for understanding...very nicely written.

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Thu 12/27/07 09:44 AM
Gem --

They can tear down all the buildings
They can take my new TV
They can pull the Pepsi off the shelves
Just as long as you're still here with me....

[Poetry has never really been my strong suit!]

:heart: :heart: :heart:

flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou


Snugglesbyfire's photo
Thu 12/27/07 09:49 AM
:heart: oh this is beautiful


I am so happy for you Lex and Geminiflowerforyou flowerforyou :smile: :smile:

TxsGal3333's photo
Thu 12/27/07 10:19 AM
Awesome write wow.bigsmile

Gemini44's photo
Thu 12/27/07 11:29 AM
Lex, you are far too sweet (and biased!). Thank you, beautiful.

Gemini44's photo
Thu 12/27/07 11:31 AM
Thank you guys so much for the positive response! I was a bit worried; writing is not my strong point!

Thank you again. flowerforyou :smile:

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Thu 12/27/07 11:35 AM

Lex, you are far too sweet (and biased!). Thank you, beautiful.


Nah, I love you too much to be biased!!

flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou :heart:


Noden's photo
Thu 12/27/07 03:44 PM
To the :heart: Muse & the Gemini:heart:
and the waiting game of love.