Topic: Cold hearted because of you
BeautyfulRae's photo
Wed 12/26/07 07:52 PM
The thunder rolls
as tears take their toll.
The heavens open
raining on a token
of an injured heart once again.
ruining the zen
of my hard earned peace and quiet
finally realizing i dont need a diet.
I should've known he was like them
I should've known i wasn't going to be his gem.
Time heals all wounds im told
but can time heal the cold
that threatens each day to take this heart
and change it from a work of art,
into something distant and dark.
I'm tired of the pain
and feeling as if one day i'll go insane
from being alone with a half a heart
all because i wasnt smart,
to give the other half of it
to the one who owned it.
Time wears on my heart,
and time allows me to start
on the inclusiveness of my soul...

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Wed 12/26/07 07:55 PM
in just a word . . .
BRAVA!

BeautyfulRae's photo
Wed 12/26/07 08:02 PM
haha thanks...

ErosJr's photo
Wed 12/26/07 08:07 PM
Edited by ErosJr on Wed 12/26/07 08:08 PM
Do you mean BRAVO?

As far as I know...There isn't any such word as "BRAVA".
(Just a hint...When there's a little RED line underneath the word,
that means it's mis-spelled.)
Oh well. It's good to know there are people dumber than me out there.

...I'm not going to get a chick with my attitude, am I?

BeautyfulRae's photo
Wed 12/26/07 08:10 PM
actually hun...brava is the faminine version of bravo. When you're saying Bravo, you would be saying it to a man, when you say Brava...it would be to a women...get the gist...

its basic italian hun

and dont call people dumb in my thread okay?? okay

Snugglesbyfire's photo
Wed 12/26/07 08:15 PM
Brava Rae:smile:

BeautyfulRae's photo
Wed 12/26/07 08:23 PM
haha...thanks snuggles...flowerforyou

shutterguy's photo
Wed 12/26/07 08:28 PM
very nice great read

BeautyfulRae's photo
Wed 12/26/07 08:30 PM
why thank you shutter...havent heard from you in awhile...

RealtyLady's photo
Wed 12/26/07 08:31 PM
Awesome, Raeflowerforyou

ErosJr's photo
Sat 01/05/08 10:56 AM
il mio errore

BeautyfulRae's photo
Fri 01/11/08 09:26 PM
what does that mean??

Dragoness's photo
Fri 01/11/08 09:46 PM
very nice, Raeflowerforyou

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Fri 01/11/08 09:55 PM
i like this

blonderockermom's photo
Fri 01/11/08 09:59 PM
Soooooo good..drinker flowerforyou

no photo
Fri 01/11/08 09:59 PM
If we had an applause emoticon..........I'd be puttin some
right here______________________________________________
Very nice piece.
smokin smokin

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Fri 01/11/08 10:23 PM
flowerforyou :smile: flowerforyou