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Edited by
Jasmine
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Sat 03/27/21 12:55 AM
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Eyes met, we met,
Chat and friendship in progress, New love, new chance, Happiness, affection, A budding romance... A taste of your lips, A blush on my face, Touching your hands, Melting in your embrace... So good yet we fear, What ifs fill our mind, Should we go our separate ways, Knowing this connection is, One of a kind.. Why we been accused, The atmosphere is getting tense, Its hard to stay calm, Nothing is making any sense, People have started talking, Getting angry and rude, Everyone is on edge, And preaching us about evil and good, Now we are been taught, What to do and don't, The shouldn'ts and shoulds, Why everyone is acting as if, We have tasted, The forbidden fruit.. |
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Nice poem .
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Nice poem . Thanks |
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let the heart leads
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let the heart leads |
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Edited by
Laska Paul
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Sun 03/28/21 06:41 AM
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Eyes met, we met, Chat and friendship in progress, New love, new chance, Happiness, affection, A budding romance... A taste of your lips, A blush on my face, Touching your hands, Melting in your embrace... So good yet we fear, What ifs fill our mind, Should we go our separate ways, Knowing this connection is, One of a kind.. Why we been accused, The atmosphere is getting tense, Its hard to stay calm, Nothing is making any sense, People have started talking, Getting angry and rude, Everyone is on edge, And preaching us about evil and good, Now we are been taught, What to do and don't, The shouldn'ts and shoulds, Why everyone is acting as if, We have tasted, The forbidden fruit.. You have changed a Lot from Beautiful to Pretty . What's the Magic ?? I do not have anything to Comment on Your Poem b'coz Nice Poem does not need any Comments ! |
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Eyes met, we met, Chat and friendship in progress, New love, new chance, Happiness, affection, A budding romance... A taste of your lips, A blush on my face, Touching your hands, Melting in your embrace... So good yet we fear, What ifs fill our mind, Should we go our separate ways, Knowing this connection is, One of a kind.. Why we been accused, The atmosphere is getting tense, Its hard to stay calm, Nothing is making any sense, People have started talking, Getting angry and rude, Everyone is on edge, And preaching us about evil and good, Now we are been taught, What to do and don't, The shouldn'ts and shoulds, Why everyone is acting as if, We have tasted, The forbidden fruit.. Good poem...was it written in rememberance of someone that ate your forbidden fruit |
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Eyes met, we met, Chat and friendship in progress, New love, new chance, Happiness, affection, A budding romance... A taste of your lips, A blush on my face, Touching your hands, Melting in your embrace... So good yet we fear, What ifs fill our mind, Should we go our separate ways, Knowing this connection is, One of a kind.. Why we been accused, The atmosphere is getting tense, Its hard to stay calm, Nothing is making any sense, People have started talking, Getting angry and rude, Everyone is on edge, And preaching us about evil and good, Now we are been taught, What to do and don't, The shouldn'ts and shoulds, Why everyone is acting as if, We have tasted, The forbidden fruit.. You have changed a Lot from Beautiful to Pretty . What's the Magic ?? I do not have anything to Comment on Your Poem b'coz Nice Poem does not need any Comments ! I guess I have to thank my ex bf for the magic! lol And thanks for calling my poem nice |
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Eyes met, we met, Chat and friendship in progress, New love, new chance, Happiness, affection, A budding romance... A taste of your lips, A blush on my face, Touching your hands, Melting in your embrace... So good yet we fear, What ifs fill our mind, Should we go our separate ways, Knowing this connection is, One of a kind.. Why we been accused, The atmosphere is getting tense, Its hard to stay calm, Nothing is making any sense, People have started talking, Getting angry and rude, Everyone is on edge, And preaching us about evil and good, Now we are been taught, What to do and don't, The shouldn'ts and shoulds, Why everyone is acting as if, We have tasted, The forbidden fruit.. You have changed a Lot from Beautiful to Pretty . What's the Magic ?? I do not have anything to Comment on Your Poem b'coz Nice Poem does not need any Comments ! I guess I have to thank my ex bf for the magic! lol And thanks for calling my poem nice Hey, I'm supposed to be the only unknown one here |
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Wow!!!!
Nice poem |
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Wow!!!! Nice poem Thank you |
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