Any tips, much appreciated

You should be cautious during deer season because ...

Looks decent to me

Funny pics btw

If you truly believe your own first 2 sentences you might as well delete the whole lot.
Get rid of these sentences, if I see someone opening with that, I'm gone. I don't need negative whinging people in my life.

I don't get the sentence about kids and daycare.
The last sentence is again negative.
Which leaves a rather short not very interesting few sentences.

No one wants someone clingy & needy, but you can phrase this entirely different without even using those words.
EXAMPLE of that:
"I'd like to meet a man who enjoys life, is undertaking but also likes an evening in with a good movie and a nice drink."

Or whatever. This excludes the clingy & needy but feels a helluva lot nicer and more appealing to read.

Add a bit about the type of person you seek. Otherwise, it's fine. Good luck!