Topic: Descent into Madness
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Thu 10/01/20 11:42 PM
You say I am crazy,
You don't like my honesty,
I am not running away,
I just prefer my dreams over reality..

So such sadness and pain,
As I withdraw in my inner world,
Where everything is beautiful,
And there is peace,
Peace is valuable like gold..

Then someone always comes along,
Tries to give me a wake up call,
To face a pitless hell,
And wait for me to fall..

I ignore them and softly drown,
In my sea of happiness,
You be happy in my happiness,
So what if this is the start of,
My descent into madness..

JulieABush's photo
Fri 10/02/20 12:57 AM
Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .

technovative's photo
Fri 10/02/20 02:27 AM
An engrossing ponderous poem, Jasmine.

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Fri 10/02/20 02:59 AM

Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .


Thanks smile2

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Fri 10/02/20 03:06 AM

An engrossing ponderous poem, Jasmine.

Yes it is, matches my mood atm smile2

daddy's photo
Fri 10/02/20 05:35 AM
maybe ,try some other topic than being sad .

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Fri 10/02/20 05:54 AM

maybe ,try some other topic than being sad .

I am one of those ppl who can write when sad lol smile2