Topic: Should I?
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Sun 09/13/20 02:07 AM

Should I make a wish,
Upon on a falling star,
Or ask the Universe for a gift,
Towards the end of this year,

Should I take a risk,
And ask for you,
As my wish, As my gift,
Coz I hold you so dear,

Should I light a candle,
Let it burn bright,
And be positive,
Our misunderstandings,
Will all clear,

Should I honestly tell you,
How I feel about you,
Or let you go,
This is my only fear,

Its weeks now since our break up,
Yet you still on my mind,
You the only reason I am waiting,
The only reason I am here..

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Sun 09/13/20 04:30 AM
And New Zealand is not a long distance?

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Sun 09/13/20 11:55 AM

And New Zealand is not a long distance?


Compared with most other countries,no.

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Sun 09/13/20 08:56 PM
are you hurting ? i have read 2 or 3 , so was wondering if u had a break up ?

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Sun 09/13/20 10:16 PM

are you hurting ? i have read 2 or 3 , so was wondering if u had a break up ?


Yes & yes..lol

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Mon 09/14/20 01:01 AM
Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .

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Mon 09/14/20 01:32 AM

Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .


Thank you smile2

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Mon 09/14/20 01:51 AM
well written poem, thank you for the good words

are you indian woman?

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Mon 09/14/20 02:46 AM
Edited by Jasmine on Mon 09/14/20 02:47 AM

well written poem, thank you for the good words

are you indian woman?


Thank you and yes I am Indian woman though not from India.