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Edited by
Noden
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Sun 12/23/07 03:37 PM
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Stabbing, staking my heart with pain
tears of rivers pouring out the strain thunder storms swarms around each thought endless search across the parched paths wondering where my heart will past touching no one in each realm drifting endlessly all alone. Gut wrenching cries at night come in draining me slowly with each crying whim tossing and tearing at these bed sheets wishing I had met my dearest soul mate patient is no friend of mine starting to feel like my lover is wine Drips of loss kisses lost on my lips remembering the wetness, oh how much I miss soul is empty once again heart is now filled from pain within. Noden http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/60531 http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/60548 |
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You are a very good writer.
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Dude I am feeling your pain right now...
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Edited by
Noden
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Sun 12/23/07 03:33 PM
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Dude I am feeling your pain right now... Dude!!! I am a woman, but thanks for the imput, klug |
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oops sorry
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((((( Noden )))))
 
I shall sit with you a bit,,, |
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hand me an oar i will help you row thats what friends are for...
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Edited by
dcrdnk
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Sun 12/23/07 10:36 PM
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Awwww Noden that was great.
There's alot of us in that boat w/ya. I'll take the other ore oops sorry oar just had oreos & milk , duhhhhhh |
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This was beautiful to wake up to, all the nice comments everyone made just made my day...
Merry Christmas all!!!!
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MERRY CHRISTMAS TO YOU NODEN
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Awesome girl
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(((((((((((Noden))))))))))))
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good writing, noden-
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Edited by
Noden
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Mon 12/24/07 08:18 AM
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with your generosity in creating a feeling of deep respect for my poems,  for catching you all under the mistletoe,
 to the many wishes your heart has been waiting for in the new year,
 of happiness, that your comments made feel
  
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Truly awesome..
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Truly awesome..
Thank you Dena! Merry Christmas to you
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Merry Christmas Sis!
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This was beautiful to wake up to, all the nice comments everyone made just made my day... Merry Christmas all!!!!
It was well deserved is why...it was Ali...I was surprised. |
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This was beautiful to wake up to, all the nice comments everyone made just made my day... Merry Christmas all!!!!
It was well deserved is why...it was Noden...I was surprised. Why thank you bro, I was saving myself didn't know if I could make the cut from the other beautiful poems I've read....but doing research on how to phrase this poetry I think has help me find words to express myself...
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