Topic: Vacancy - a poem of love, loss & hope | |
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I was sitting looking at a picture in a dull looking lounge of a dull house.
The colours used were so blue & so too was the woman beside me. I saw rows of houses & a dreary looking lake, smack bang in the middle & closed off with a gate. There's no birds, no people or sign of life- Just trees looking bare & two boats - near left & far right. Why would anyone waste time to paint such a thing? It.s just houses, water, sky & well....- nothing. A grand picture of nothing that hangs on a wall. For me to just stare at, but see nothing at all & then it hit me- It.s just like the house, with a mother and a son, who've lost their meaning to life. I feel sorrow, I feel pity for all I now see, but there's hope in the centre of the picture- Two very tall standing Trees..... A little sad knowing- there used to be three. But something tells me, deep down they'll stay standing whatever may be. |
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Edited by
JulieABush
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Sun 04/19/20 04:23 AM
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Nice .
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Thanks. Do you write aswell?
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don't find too much poems with rhymes anymore. have you published any?
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How cool
Sorry I can't write any! |
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Hi not yet no. Just write for a hobby.
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Yes, I did write poems but they’re on another site. Keep up the good work .
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Thanks Julie.
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You’re welcome .
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Quite interesting....felt like reading more and more
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