Topic: good guy poem
mrosebro's photo
Thu 12/20/07 04:56 PM
i wrote this maybe 6 weeks ago, had it posted on my myspace... re read it tonight, try n give myself a little bit of a lift, and relised i should post it here... was wondering what kind of input i might get from you guys here at JSH about it.


I am a happy person, and i lead a good life,
I do the things i know i should, and i do what i feel is right.
I do not pursue, that which i believe not to be mine,
I believe i'll find, what belongs to me, all in due time.

Sometimes the path is hard, as true the purpose may be,
And the lesson to learn, all along has been right in front of me.
I have set my goals, and will never sacrifice my pride,
But that is not enough, to lighten what i feel inside.

All i can do, is hold my head up high,
And sometimes i damn myself, for feeling shy.
But I swear i will keep a positive outlook,
And i'll allways remember why.

Because I deserve good things,
And I will cherish them in the end.
Because i'm good hearted, honest,
Because i'm all around, a true Good Guy.

CaRisLOVE's photo
Thu 12/20/07 04:59 PM
yah yaaaaah!
nicely done!
yah im good guy and im proud!

blonderockermom's photo
Thu 12/20/07 04:59 PM
very nice...gotta keep believin':smile: flowerforyou

Mossop's photo
Thu 12/20/07 05:06 PM
Super ! Right from the heart. :smile:

mrosebro's photo
Thu 12/20/07 05:13 PM
i'm glad you guys like it, i wrote this at a time when i was feeling weak, but i knew i would be strong again... that's why i re-read it tonight... i was feeling weak, and wanted to feel strong again... it keeps me lookin up, and on the right road of emotion if you will.

Shy0ne's photo
Thu 12/20/07 05:15 PM
Omg I loved ithappy it made me think of a problem I was having, I'm glad the problem is a was instead of an am having:) hope u write more.:smile:

mrosebro's photo
Thu 12/20/07 05:17 PM
yea... i gotta be like, in the right mood to write like that... it happens rarely, once every couple months usually ... but it feels so good to get it out, so anything else i write i'll be sure to share... seems people at JSH are allways lookin for somethign uplifting ya know :)