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Rate my profile
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It would be a lot better if you would list some interests.
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Please rate my profile?
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Please rate my profile? Then please start your own thread |
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rate my profile
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rate my profile Start your own thread please |
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I would start the text with "Would love to meet new people..." and the stuff that follows, do start the sentence with "I".
Delete the part before. It's incoherent so it reads difficult, it's not really the info that is needed on a dating site AND you repeat much of it in the section after it. If I'd come across it when I was initially interested in a man I'd leave. If the text would start with the "I would love to meet new people" and onwards, I'd keep reading. |
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