Topic: Rate my profile
Christopher Ronald's photo
Tue 04/14/20 04:59 PM
Rate my profile

Poetrywriter's photo
Tue 04/14/20 06:02 PM
It would be a lot better if you would list some interests.

Tam's photo
Wed 04/15/20 12:09 AM
Please rate my profile?

delightfulillusion's photo
Wed 04/15/20 12:17 AM

Please rate my profile?


Then please start your own thread waving

Alex's photo
Wed 04/15/20 12:23 AM
rate my profile

delightfulillusion's photo
Wed 04/15/20 12:24 AM

rate my profile


Start your own thread please

SparklingCrystal 💖💎's photo
Wed 04/15/20 08:33 AM
I would start the text with "Would love to meet new people..." and the stuff that follows, do start the sentence with "I".
Delete the part before. It's incoherent so it reads difficult, it's not really the info that is needed on a dating site AND you repeat much of it in the section after it.
If I'd come across it when I was initially interested in a man I'd leave. If the text would start with the "I would love to meet new people" and onwards, I'd keep reading.