Topic: Sweet Powerlessness
cowboy's photo
Fri 04/10/20 12:35 PM
Sweet powerlessness
The truth spitting in my eyes so i can see the way
Waves of awakening
Sweeping over my soul
Like the moon swoons the tides
Washing away castles built from the sands of my rational
Dissolving into an ocean of peace
Whole hearted abandonment
Of my own understanding
To its foamy white breakers
Leaning on life itself rather than lazily on my crutches of certainty
I find my hope in my trust
And learn to trust that such hope is trustworthy

JulieABush's photo
Sat 04/11/20 03:59 AM
Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .

Patricia Morrarty's photo
Sat 04/11/20 07:42 AM
Nice one

Amy layne's photo
Sat 04/11/20 12:04 PM
pretty good, i love it

Erlom  k Noah 's photo
Sat 04/11/20 05:28 PM
Deep in thought I love it.