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You drove the stake in my worst mistake
Now I'm the one left alone Brought out the evil that's the devil in me And now I'm on my own inside the dark unknown You told the lie you believed in me Lights dimming low lost the glow You are the sin and so sinister I'm just the soul you owe The who you left unwhole You were the anger in all my danger Old habits keep me this cold You killed the light that enlightened me My ark of dark afloat, now I've lost all my hope The spoiled child among all the children The troll controlling me You are the ire that fueled my fire Stab my stability, I'm my worst enemy |
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Beautiful and profound, thank you pumpi
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*chills*
๐งก๐งก๐งก |
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A talented and meaningful poem, pumpi. I appreciate how you were able to take a segment from one word in most lines, that separately is a word itself, and use it comprehensively in the same line.
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I won't take credit for this, this is song lyrics from Chad Grey from Mudvayne. I thought the words were beautiful & am glad you liked it too.โค
https://youtu.be/QocdrkcSdAw But I do relate to a lot of his music on a personal level. Much of his very deep lyrics go overlooked because it's metal. |
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Thought provoking and nice poem .
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You are the ire that fueled my fire
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