Topic: SOP, look and give advice.
Simeron's photo
Sun 02/16/20 04:33 PM
The SnS,

Check it out, man or woman, and feel free to advise.

Trying to be proactive while still being approachable. Trying to find the middle ground.

Poetrywriter's photo
Sun 02/16/20 09:32 PM
Edited by Poetrywriter on Sun 02/16/20 09:33 PM
Looks good but I have a few suggestions. Firstly I would still add your interests instead of saying they are many and varied. The ladies would like to know if you have anything in common. Secondly, I would remove the negativity in the beginning of your write up about gift cards and scamming and just start it with If you are a woman...... You don't have to say REAL woman since they already know they are real. Other than that it is good to go.

Simeron's photo
Sun 02/16/20 09:51 PM

Looks good but I have a few suggestions. Firstly I would still add your interests instead of saying they are many and varied. The ladies would like to know if you have anything in common. Secondly, I would remove the negativity in the beginning of your write up about gift cards and scamming and just start it with If you are a woman...... You don't have to say REAL woman since they already know they are real. Other than that it is good to go.


Thanks for the tips. I also made a post about using Google Images...it has help me weed through the maze out here.

I will be taking your suggestions and editing because the negatives at the front isnt working anyway.

Thank you again.

Poetrywriter's photo
Sun 02/16/20 09:56 PM
You are welcome.

SparklingCrystal 💖💎's photo
Mon 02/17/20 01:50 AM
Indeed remove the negative start.

Simeron's photo
Mon 02/17/20 01:03 PM

Indeed remove the negative start.


Okay, I thought I did. Is it not showing the last edit?

Can you tell me what you see when you go there?