Topic: here is a short poem i wrote, what do u think?
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Tue 12/18/07 09:34 PM
Never has the blood in my veins flowed so fiercely as when I feel this around me. I am whole. Now I feel the passion burning, my resolve to push me further. I am a mortal man, but im not falling. I am not broken yet. This cements my own beliefs, I am my own master. The deepest gray forever lives inside of me, but I am not not afraid for I have lived this agony. I have suffered defeat, pain and loss. I still push to the edge and never falter. My challenge comes in the air that I breathe. I will never choke on failure. No more are that days that I will fear for I have found a strength that no one can match and I will push forward. "

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Tue 12/18/07 09:47 PM
Always be strong enough to bend,and you will never break.:smile: