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Topic: Hell
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Tue 12/18/07 06:34 AM
I am in hell...

The darkness, darker than the blackest night
Fills my being, filing me with hatred, sorrow, and regret
The burning pain coincides with the burning flames.
This... is hell.

The shadow, groping for more, silently consumes my soul
Her voice, like a hundred banshees, rips through my mind
Filling the soundless void of my life with agony.
This... is hell.

Gripping my heart, the loss squeezes me of life
She said, we would be together, together forever
Forever is over, and the misery begins.
This... is hell.

This is really hell, but I wonder, am I truly dead?
This cannot go on, this can be no more...
It's not worth the pain I endure
This... is hell, this... is life.

An Eternal Sadness: : : : : :


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Tue 12/18/07 06:45 AM
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Tue 12/18/07 07:05 AM
:cry: good write sonetimes I wonder is love a form of hell.flowerforyou
someguy1313's photo
Tue 12/18/07 07:53 AM
it can be
peachiegirl28's photo
Tue 12/18/07 07:54 AM
:cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: flowerforyou
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Tue 12/18/07 11:46 AM
:cry: flowerforyou

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