Topic: An Honest Explicit Poem...
Joel7Cantu2's photo
Sun 12/16/07 06:41 PM
An honest poem..brokenheart

Memory of Love
Sylent 1

I have tasted the lips of a passionate woman.
I have tasted her tongue as she tasted my mouth.
I have felt the pleasure between her legs.
I made love to her very soul.
I felt her heart beat as I was in her.
I gave her my world as I came.
That was the last time I felt true love.

Bobby0414's photo
Sun 12/16/07 06:50 PM
oh yea thats really heart felt are you forreal with this

Joel7Cantu2's photo
Sun 12/16/07 06:55 PM
Yep! This is a true life poem.

Noden's photo
Sun 12/16/07 07:04 PM
Hey, hey , hey, that's not nice....you there, if you don't like what you read why reply, everyone can use this space to say what they want, just leave if you don't like it.....shsssssssss


Thank you for sharing what you feel in your heart, very nicely done....Joelsmokin smokin smokin don't let nothing get in your way....brush it off...k