Topic: cold, cold night
ragin' cajun's photo
Mon 08/26/19 12:09 AM
I remember that night, so cold with snow all around. The stars so clear, so near, as if you could reach up and touch then/I remember your arms around me. So warm and so close. Two heartbeats that beats as one. your lips on mine. so alive. I renenber your touch, so gentle. your scent. the look in your eyes. How we said I love you to each other. Be together forever. I remember that night. A gun in another hand took your life. How you took a bullet that was aim for me. I remember. how I held you dieing, Blood red snow. Silent screams to the heavens. Prayers unanwser I remember the taste of blood as I kissed you, goodbye. How warm it was. I remember the minute your heart stop for mine broke that very second. I remember, police sirens, so loud, red and blue lights, endless questions. I remember as they took your body, away. As they pry my hands away. Screaming not yet, not yet. I remember the fureral, All the people, saying how sorrow they are, How they could see how much in love we were. I remember miss you babe

delightfulillusion's photo
Mon 08/26/19 12:12 AM
:heart:

:hugging:

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Mon 08/26/19 12:41 AM
Carol you made me cry :sob: with your words. :pray::pray::pray::heartbeat::heartbeat::heartbeat:you’re precious sis and I’m proud of you :thumbsup::thumbsup:

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Mon 08/26/19 12:55 AM
Great poem, very meaningful and heartfelt.

JulieABush's photo
Mon 08/26/19 01:57 AM
Moving poem:thumbsup: .

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Mon 08/26/19 05:38 AM
Wow, That was very vivid and powerful. Very moving.

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Mon 08/26/19 09:42 AM
Very beautiful poetry :heart_exclamation:

gravitational77's photo
Mon 08/26/19 12:57 PM
damn, that sorrowful,

ragin' cajun's photo
Mon 08/26/19 03:34 PM
Thank you it helps to write actually slept 7hours last night no dreams