Topic: ,mi'
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Thu 12/13/07 02:10 AM
mi sol
mi soul

missile
of stars

Stars!
Dancing for nights

left drifting on a
steel ballroom

but on top of the ocean

Youth
and the distance of Stars

Oh my God
One is dying

dying?

But doesn't it
Become
One

with the
sky

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Thu 12/13/07 02:37 AM
I must admit, I really don't understand this poem. But I kind of like it. I especially like the play of "mi sol, mi soul, missile" well done.