Topic: "Let Those Tears Flow" (short & simple poem)
Turtlepoet78's photo
Wed 12/12/07 11:16 AM
It doesn't make you less of a man, my brother just let those tears flow~

It doesn't matter how old, if you don't take a moment to cry then you don't grow

When you feel on top of the world, let a couple fall in joy & dance all night~

When you feel like the worlds crushing in on you and all you want to do is fight

Sit back, let that tear spill down your cheek, grab a loved one & hold them tight~

Comfort is well within sight, so be not ashamed and walk here with me under this light

For without positive confrontation, it keeps building & eventualy it's gonna blow~

So before it's too late, there is one thing that I need you to know

~My brother, never be afraid to let those tears flow...

newbornwoman's photo
Wed 12/12/07 11:19 AM
omg that was so good

Enya's photo
Wed 12/12/07 11:19 AM
:heart: SWEET POEM:heart:

polypeasant's photo
Wed 12/12/07 11:20 AM
I loved that. Wish more men did cry. However, it makes me cry to see a man cry, especially when it was my dad. I think its because we so seldom see men cry, that we assume something very terrible has happened.sad flowerforyou

Turtlepoet78's photo
Wed 12/12/07 11:31 AM
Thanks so much guys, I wrote this after a discussion with a friend who told me "real men don't cry", to which I responded "real men aren't afraid to cry". Blessings to all;^]

Katertots37's photo
Wed 12/12/07 11:32 AM
It shows you have true feelings also when you cry..so what if you are a man or not...He's a true gentleman who shows their emotions. Very nice poem.

Nightace's photo
Wed 12/12/07 11:33 AM
Yeah it was really good. drinker

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Wed 12/12/07 03:07 PM
drinker Very good!

LAMom's photo
Thu 12/13/07 11:10 PM
flowerforyou flowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Fri 12/14/07 05:11 AM
very nice indeedbigsmile