Topic: PITY LIFE
keithpl2's photo
Thu 06/06/19 07:25 AM
For pity’s sake stop
harassing this Life

It is no more than
what?

haze to light
womb to frame
suck to bite
belch to howl
whine to word

and no less
than slaves and supergods
who
deserving what they dream
must live it through

Life is neither more nor less
than loss of death

Either way Death
the imp !
could not care a jot.

keithpl2's photo
Thu 06/06/19 11:03 PM
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I think I prefer HARCELING to harrasing

Tom4Uhere's photo
Fri 06/07/19 12:43 AM
Interesting jouney to your mind~

I'm wondering who hurt you so bad?

While your poetry expresses mood and feelings, it is dark?

Think about finding something positive to describe and allow us to feel that with you.

Poetry doesn't have to be dark.
For every cloud there is a ray of sunshine and while we might ignore that sunshine, its there all the same.

Find your sunshine my friend....

keithpl2's photo
Fri 06/07/19 12:11 PM
Thanks Philip (chuckle!)

But I did actually plaguerize that item from one of my earlier
MINDSTOKERS.

keithpl2's photo
Fri 06/14/19 05:18 AM
I agree KRED

But humour and irony are tricky enough in ONE language, let alone when it involves translation. You obviously got it: but I can't do anything for those who didn't.
kpl