Topic: PITY LIFE | |
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For pity’s sake stop
harassing this Life It is no more than what? haze to light womb to frame suck to bite belch to howl whine to word and no less than slaves and supergods who deserving what they dream must live it through Life is neither more nor less than loss of death Either way Death the imp ! could not care a jot. |
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I think I prefer HARCELING to harrasing |
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Interesting jouney to your mind~
I'm wondering who hurt you so bad? While your poetry expresses mood and feelings, it is dark? Think about finding something positive to describe and allow us to feel that with you. Poetry doesn't have to be dark. For every cloud there is a ray of sunshine and while we might ignore that sunshine, its there all the same. Find your sunshine my friend.... |
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Thanks Philip (chuckle!)
But I did actually plaguerize that item from one of my earlier MINDSTOKERS. |
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I agree KRED
But humour and irony are tricky enough in ONE language, let alone when it involves translation. You obviously got it: but I can't do anything for those who didn't. kpl |
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