I was as complete and honest about my answers as I could be.

Good job

Yes a good example of a profile

Thanks guys.

Yes I agree with ivegot and Freebird, very good profile.

Good luck

Thank you mzrosie! I've watched several of your videos on YouTube. Love your giggle!!!

oh thank you, IT_Guy

Well... first impression: You're trying to advertise yourself to get more work, because of your name. I'd change that.

Second... have a profile picture of your face. Most are you far away

Third... photos with a child are dubious. Is it yours or not? remove them. Never use pictures with other pictures as we don't know who the other person is.

Then... Remove the first sentence, not necessary to say, it's not friendly but repelling. It says you've been at it for some time, meaning you're a hard sell, and it just doesn't sound inviting.

2nd sentence... rephrase it so it's friendlier. Are you trying to find someone or to chase people off?
You got to bear in mind when someone first reads that they're not really interested yet. So "wasting my time" would do the trick to get them to go.

It's not rocket science: a profile should be a warm invite, not a means to blow ppl off.

I agree with Crystal.

I would also reword your heading... saying you want someone to spend your free time with comes across as when you have nothing better to do. Also remove the "/free time" after "quality time".

Consider removing the cartoon photo... it could be offensive to some women, and also raise a red flag of aggressive behavior. Putting a woman over your lap to slap her on the buttocks is a sign of control and aggression, imo.

Welcome and good luck!

I hadn't even seen the cartoon image.
I don't know if the OP is into BDSM -then he should state so-, or that he feels men/he is superior to women.
What can I say? I press the "NO!" button.

I agree with River and Crystal.

Seems ivegot, Freebird and I rated a different profile.

Not reading again!!!!

Thank you everyone for your responses. Very insightful.