your gaze is fixed
burning a hole into my skin
my naked flesh exposed
intensified heat growing inside
your touch soft and hot
our lips meet, and fire burns
your hands searching
they find me wanting,
hot , wet and waiting
you reposition and taste
sweet nectar surfaces
you kiss me again
pulling yourself in
we move to meet each other
constantly moving, slowly ,
then our hearts rythym speeds
and we move faster,
fireworks explode, as our passion increases
orgasmic bliss, unfolds like this

they need to add a "booooing" emoticon I think

Need I say more!

wow

very cool dana

DAMN

thanks for ur opinions everyone

That wasn't nice Brian....I think she did rather well with that. You keep writing Angel.

thank you wolf, but brian is free to express what he feels and thinks about it, need both kinds of opinions to get better.. lol

I don't think you understood wolf

sorry angel, wasn't meant to offend

i was not offended brian but thank you

I am a fan

Why do I suddenly feel warm.....




whew it's hot in here.........






I have to open a window.....

thank you to everyone.. who has posted..

Dana, you're right, everyone needs both opinions to get better I guess...but I don't think a booing emoticon is necessary. I'm sorry Brian I misunderstood.

as the cursor slowly blinks
the rythmic pulsing makes me think
where've i gone right where've i gone wrong
hell who really knows
contemplation second guessing tears the mind to shreads
what ifs and hind sight make it clear yet still it pollutes my head
the questions swirling never ending driving me insane
i think i'll have another drink and pray it kills this pain

I think he was saying 'boing' not 'boo'

...angel heated up the place