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I miss you when it’s quiet
I miss your lips on mine I miss the arguments the restraints I miss the sadness I miss the madness What is love but a series of moments lived and lost Such a rush so much passion Erupted and flowed so heavily from our souls We were the 3percent you were my two fold A pair so perfectly matched you knew how to love me ...to take me...and you did again and again... Time now stands still a moment lost I can still smell you on me and feel your presence everywhere I miss the good times I miss your eyes that burned so heavily into mine What is love but a moment in time |
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Beautiful sweetie
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I loved it, ATW.
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Beautiful sweetie Thank you |
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I loved it, ATW. Thank you Rosie |
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A stirring portrait of feelings many can relate to.
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I like it. You convey those moments as realistic and timeless.
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A stirring portrait of feelings many can relate to. That’s me lol relatable 🤦♀️Thanks techno |
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I like it. You convey those moments as realistic and timeless. Thanks I have just been feeling a lot of different things lately and they are coming out lol |
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Nice write! Hope to read more, AroundTheWorld!
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Nice write! Hope to read more, AroundTheWorld! Thanks stormy I’ve written a few here so far I’m no poet lol just been inspired lately to write |
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Loved the poem, it's quite heart touching
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