Topic: Addicted
CrazyPalindrome's photo
Sat 12/08/07 08:50 PM
Another one I'm vaugly reluctant to share, just because... well, I still feel a little blushing blushing when I talk about this kind of thing...

Feel that sweet flesh on flesh
my lips dance on your neck
your pulse beats in my heart
in my head
in my groin
You are mine.
Feel that sweet touch,
That light caress
your breathing quickens
and makes mine ragged
and your pulse races on
dragging me under
that elusive drumbeat
making me work harder than ever before
to hear you scream my name
making my fingers stumble on your buttons
making my hands tremble across your chest
in this darkness you are mine
but in the morning,
will you still be here?
will I wake in your arms, in that quiet peace
your heartbeat at my back
in my heart,
in my mind?
Or will I wake again to an empty pillow,
and empty heart again,
already longing for your return,
slave to your fits and passions?
You torture me with your slow caress,
and smouldering eyes.
Be mine.
Walk with me in the world,
and I will follow you faithfully.
Do not scorn my love,
my touch,
my hope.
Be mine,
I have always been yours.

bgeorge's photo
Sat 12/08/07 08:58 PM
that was beautifulflowerforyou flowerforyou

johncarl's photo
Sat 12/08/07 08:59 PM
love it.:heart: dont stop posting

Wolfeyes58's photo
Sat 12/08/07 09:37 PM
That was done with class...very well done.

Unsane's photo
Sat 12/08/07 09:59 PM
wow. excellent.

a feeling i can empathize with too. for better or worse. :)

great job. keep it up.

neanderthalDave's photo
Sat 12/08/07 10:06 PM
that was great, im just kinda gettin in 2 poetry but ur my style

kc0003's photo
Sat 12/08/07 10:09 PM
very good

no need to be reluctant to share such nice work

flowerforyou