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Sunlight streams through shady treetops
leaving a patch of peaceful grace onward I trod cross grassy carpet striving to reach this restful place The tree is dancing in playful breezes and below it rests a glowing stone my lover is waiting in this valley to meet me and I rush to meet him all alone I sit by the stone and lean upon it without any lingering need to cry For he was old, and I am older, what a peaceful place to die |
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I am mesmerized by your poetic words - the imagery: beautiful, sad, moving, love, loss, lost, wisdom, maturity, life's meaning...
Thank you for sharing your poems. 
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Awwww....that was sad Hannah....I was getting used to your happy poems.
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Well, death is just part of life... and I wanted to portray it as something... not entirely bad/scary. As a needed rest I guess.
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Like they say, there are only things that are certain and that is death and taxes....it's a shame we can't do without either. If Noah can live 600 years why can't we?
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I personally would not want to live forever... especially if I were the only one that could live forever... man... it would be bad. I had a poem about immortality... but I lost it. It's not on this computer anymore. Oh well.
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