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Topic: a key
jimz Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 2365	Fri 12/07/07 03:17 PM
white wooden keys a crippled finger bangs on the last one a pale hands bends awkwardly over the piano the back arched awkwardly over the piano the neck too old to be sore anymore bent awkwardly over the piano only the eyes not the fool's eye's nor the eyes of hades some say the eyes of god but when I look into those of my grandpa playing mozart there is no death or time only his song I think, maybe, the eyes of the soul but which one?

JellyBelly182 Joined Mon 08/27/07 Posts: 2773	Fri 12/07/07 03:46 PM
Loved it.

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Sat 12/08/07 07:40 AM
nice description, great writing

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Sat 12/08/07 07:42 AM
very nice Jim

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Sat 12/08/07 10:09 AM


MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Sat 12/08/07 10:12 AM
The soul of his playing... Good write!

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Sat 12/08/07 10:39 AM
(((( Jim )))))) The soul has many eyes,,,, Beautiful

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