Topic: NAKED
The Dog's photo
Fri 09/14/18 10:32 PM
In my mind my signature work is Naked. It appears as the first poem under the Candlelight Collection:
NAKED

Loins clad
In full attire
To be naked with you

Is my heart’s desire

Not speaking of clothes
Or a literal undressing
Just two souls in touch
In commune and nestling

To know that our heartbeats
Are so intertwined
To know you never doubt
What’s on my mind

Words never spoken
You know how I feel
Bodies fully clothed
Souls naked that’s real

Just with a thought
Or perhaps a glance
Another layer unrobed
It wasn’t by chance

Why all the fuss
Why all the reaction
It’s your heartbeat
That brings satisfaction

I know who you are
Right down to the core
I see you naked
Still I want more

My desire for you
Is straight off the chart
Don’t physically undress
Just reveal your heart

So take layers off
One at a time
You show me yours
I’ll show you mine

Wounds that are deep
Scars that won’t heal
I’ve got those too
So how do you feel

If I drop my defense
If I lower my guard
If I stand here naked
In your heart’s front yard

What will you do
Don’t stumble, don’t falter
Will you still love me
Or send this lamb to the slaughter

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Sat 09/15/18 08:32 PM
Naked to the core. I like it a lot, thanks for sharing

Youregonnalikethis's photo
Fri 09/21/18 06:12 PM
Get's right to the point of what relationships are meant to be about. Nice work! :thumbsup:

Cocobrown's photo
Mon 10/01/18 06:18 PM
love that flow :heart_eyes:

mig25's photo
Mon 10/01/18 06:48 PM
This is cool. Like it

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Mon 10/01/18 06:51 PM
Like it