I couldn't sleep so..

Dancing by the river there is my sweet Elaine
Beauty like a quiver from the woods of Elfenheim
Hair that make you shiver like a golden morning rain
Eyes of pure silver brings blizzard in your vains
A gaze of sharpened cleaver that cuts you heart and brain
Or an arrow to your liver you die and live again
Lips that gives you fever first then you go insane
And a body like a diva makes you love in squealing pain
So tell me little beaver what would you realy gain
Cutting stream off the river where dancing my sweet Elaine

Beautiful

Thank you very match,so are you

Well thank you

you are welcome

A little tweeking:
Dancing by the river there is my sweet Elaine
Beauty like a quiver from the woods of Elfenheim
Hair that make you shiver like a golden morning rain
Eyes of blueish silver sends blizzard through your vains
A gaze of sharpened cleaver that cuts you heart and brain
An arrow to your liver that you die and live again
Lips that gives you fever first then you go insane
A body like a diva makes you love in squealing pain
So tell me little beaver what would you realy gain
Cutting stream off the river where dancing my sweet Elaine

Very nice

I guess it would be cheasy to say "so are you" again but you are really nice and your review is most apreciated.Thank you