Topic: Who I am.....
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Wed 12/05/07 06:08 PM
I am a person just like any other.
Born from a father and a mother.
Raised in a world like no other.
I am made of flesh and bone.
And in a place, that I call home.
In my room, I sit alone.
And in my hand, a microphone.
I clutch it tightly in my hand.
Please don't judge but understand.
Because with this microphone in hand.
I will show the world, just who I am.

JD8502's photo
Wed 12/05/07 06:09 PM
well im not much for rap...or whatever but hey man not bad if you can put it all together right.

Kidmud79's photo
Wed 12/05/07 06:12 PM
it's not about rap. he probably just got the new karaoke game for ps2

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Wed 12/05/07 06:13 PM
Look at me
You may think you see
Who I really am
But you’ll never know me
Every day, is as if I play apart
Now I see
If I wear a mask
I can fool the world
But I can not fool
My heart
Who is that girl I see
Staring straight back at me?
When will my reflection show
Who I am inside?
I am now
In a world where I have to
Hide my heart
And what I believe in
But somehow
I will show the world
What’s inside my heart
And be loved for who I am
Who is that girl I see
Staring straight back at me?
Why is my reflection
Someone I don’t know?
Must I pretend that i’m
Someone else for all time?
When will my reflection show
Who I am inside?
There’s a heart that must
Be free to fly
That burns with a need
To know the reason why
Why must we all conceal
What we think
How we feel
Must there be a secret me
I’m forced to hide?
I won’t pretend that i’m
Someone else
For all time
When will my reflections show
Who I am inside?
When will my reflections show
Who I am inside?

JD8502's photo
Wed 12/05/07 06:16 PM
allways someone to tear someone else down...haha

TxsGal3333's photo
Wed 12/05/07 06:20 PM
good one bigsmile

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Wed 12/05/07 06:23 PM
flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

Totage's photo
Wed 12/05/07 06:24 PM
Both of them are pretty good poems

Rebecca121885's photo
Wed 12/05/07 06:33 PM

Look at me
You may think you see
Who I really am
But you’ll never know me
Every day, is as if I play apart
Now I see
If I wear a mask
I can fool the world
But I can not fool
My heart
Who is that girl I see
Staring straight back at me?
When will my reflection show
Who I am inside?
I am now
In a world where I have to
Hide my heart
And what I believe in
But somehow
I will show the world
What’s inside my heart
And be loved for who I am
Who is that girl I see
Staring straight back at me?
Why is my reflection
Someone I don’t know?
Must I pretend that i’m
Someone else for all time?
When will my reflection show
Who I am inside?
There’s a heart that must
Be free to fly
That burns with a need
To know the reason why
Why must we all conceal
What we think
How we feel
Must there be a secret me
I’m forced to hide?
I won’t pretend that i’m
Someone else
For all time
When will my reflections show
Who I am inside?
When will my reflections show
Who I am inside?

Christina Aguilera- Reflections

Differentkindofwench's photo
Wed 12/05/07 06:44 PM
Yup, I believe it was used in Mulan too.

Differentkindofwench's photo
Wed 12/05/07 06:45 PM
Da absolute, well done.

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Wed 12/05/07 07:14 PM
Thanks yalldrinker

LAMom's photo
Wed 12/05/07 08:07 PM
You are simply you,,, a vision a meaning a human
Most awesome,,, i like flowerforyou

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Thu 12/06/07 07:01 AM
Powerful poem, great job.:smile:

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Thu 12/06/07 07:01 AM
Powerful poem, great job.:smile: