Topic: i dont open my eyes anymore
Unsane's photo
Mon 12/03/07 10:00 AM
Edited by Unsane on Mon 12/03/07 10:01 AM
i dont open my eyes anymore when i
(in)gest iculate the rag-tag rhythm that
i weave into my past,
oneday at atime.

i cant really say that
i can make sense of your mess.
and dontyou DARE
lay blame on the
leeetle feigned reality that
shakes and bakes
the lipstick to my neckline.

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Mon 12/03/07 10:07 AM
huh, well, you told me!

i held my breath at dare

and am now thinking of violent femmeslaugh laugh ?

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Mon 12/03/07 10:08 AM
oh, and that was very cool

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Mon 12/03/07 11:58 AM

leeetle feigned reality that
shakes and bakes
the lipstick to my neckline.

Great last lines. Let's see more.

TxsGal3333's photo
Mon 12/03/07 12:05 PM
Awww your on a roll bigsmile

Unsane's photo
Mon 12/03/07 12:39 PM
more!? i think i can do that.

LAMom's photo
Mon 12/03/07 08:48 PM
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