Topic: Symphony of Madness
ephraimglass's photo
Sun 12/02/07 11:42 AM
Okay, so it sounds like the title of a Castlevania game. This is a sonnet that I wrote back in college. Some friends of mine were taking a writing class and one of the assignments was to write a sonnet. They dared me to write one if I could and this was the result. It's not amazing, but for a first effort, I'm rather pleased with it.

*Symphony of Madness*

A pale and graceful belle was she, my love.
Alas my lack of gumption sealed my fate,
For she flew swiftly as a mourning dove
And she was gone; for shame, I was too late.

I prayed to God, almighty Lord above
That time could my ineptitude negate
But fear of failure I could not remove.
Fair company I then began to hate.

Within me love and loathing always strove.
Together joined as man and mismatched mate,
Discordant pair safe harboured in the cove:
My soul, therein sense to eradicate.

Behold my madness played in symphony
For love that never was and shall not be.

Unsane's photo
Sun 12/02/07 11:44 AM
oh, doesnt that suck. :(

not the poem, but the situation.

great write.

synfullygood's photo
Sun 12/02/07 12:07 PM
Wow....this brings back some memeories of my own ...and don't we all play the "what if" game with ourselves....
Great piece of writing.....

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sun 12/02/07 01:07 PM
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