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Please advise me on my profile.
I want too weed out the scammers. I am not looking for hookups either. Thank you |
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Edited by
Stu
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Mon 12/11/17 05:52 AM
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To much to read.. lol
Please refer to rule #20 of the forums though.. Oh, and welcome to M2.. |
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I am not a scammer but I appreciate your perspective. So basically less is more in this case. I'll see what I can shave off
Thank you |
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Nice profile. No nonsense and to the point.
Best Wishes |
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Thank you
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Very well organized profile. I like it!
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ok I just checked out your profile...
Upload more photos... recent ones would be good with full body shot. Your profile is too negative. It will not prevent bad people from contacting you but it could drive away those that might be interested in you. "tittues" no matter how you spell it, is vulgar... boobs is ok or breasts is more acceptable. Better yet.. delete the darn thing! my two cents :) |
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Hi
Thank you for your feedback. My pictures are from last summer so they're pretty current. I had to put the negative stuff in the beginning because scammers are like the plague. Unfortunately scammers don't know how to read and they contact me anyway. |
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I am not a scammer but I appreciate your perspective. So basically less is more in this case. I'll see what I can shave off Thank you I wasn't trying to insinuate you were. Sorry if you took it that way.. . They don't like us mentioning the "S" word... |
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No offense take.
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Looks really good, although I'd eliminate the negative stuff. It will not stop any scammers or liars from contacting you. If anything, it puts a bullseye on your back.
I'd make the first paragraph look like this: "I am widowed since 2005. Ladies, i am old school and a gentleman. I am looking for a companion and friendship with a level of commitment, honesty, loyalty and mutual understanding. I believe actions speak louder than words. I have a dry and sarcastic sense of humor. I enjoy giving and taking a good teasing." Additionally, think about eliminating the sentence I highlighted. It will mean nothing to a woman until she judges for herself. You could be the biggest azzhole on the planet saying the same thing. The second paragraph is fine. Good luck out here! |
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