Topic: Looking for your input.
22gman's photo
Mon 12/11/17 05:47 AM
Please advise me on my profile.
I want too weed out the scammers. I am not looking for hookups either.
Thank you

Stu's photo
Mon 12/11/17 05:51 AM
Edited by Stu on Mon 12/11/17 05:52 AM
To much to read.. lol


Please refer to rule #20 of the forums though..

Oh, and welcome to M2..

22gman's photo
Mon 12/11/17 02:08 PM
I am not a scammer but I appreciate your perspective. So basically less is more in this case. I'll see what I can shave off
Thank you

no photo
Mon 12/11/17 02:23 PM
Nice profile. No nonsense and to the point.

Best Wishes

22gman's photo
Mon 12/11/17 02:34 PM
Thank you

no photo
Mon 12/11/17 02:42 PM
Very well organized profile. I like it!

mzrosie's photo
Mon 12/11/17 02:58 PM
ok I just checked out your profile...

Upload more photos... recent ones would be good with full body shot.

Your profile is too negative. It will not prevent bad people from contacting you but it could drive away those that might be interested in you. "tittues" no matter how you spell it, is vulgar... boobs is ok or breasts is more acceptable. Better yet.. delete the darn thing!

my two cents :)



22gman's photo
Mon 12/11/17 05:41 PM
Hi
Thank you for your feedback. My pictures are from last summer so they're pretty current. I had to put the negative stuff in the beginning because scammers are like the plague. Unfortunately scammers don't know how to read and they contact me anyway.

Stu's photo
Mon 12/11/17 06:12 PM

I am not a scammer but I appreciate your perspective. So basically less is more in this case. I'll see what I can shave off
Thank you


I wasn't trying to insinuate you were. Sorry if you took it that way.. .

They don't like us mentioning the "S" word... laugh

22gman's photo
Mon 12/11/17 06:13 PM
No offense take.

no photo
Wed 12/13/17 08:28 AM
Looks really good, although I'd eliminate the negative stuff. It will not stop any scammers or liars from contacting you. If anything, it puts a bullseye on your back.

I'd make the first paragraph look like this:


"I am widowed since 2005. Ladies, i am old school and a gentleman. I am looking for a companion and friendship with a level of commitment, honesty, loyalty and mutual understanding. I believe actions speak louder than words. I have a dry and sarcastic sense of humor. I enjoy giving and taking a good teasing."

Additionally, think about eliminating the sentence I highlighted. It will mean nothing to a woman until she judges for herself. You could be the biggest azzhole on the planet saying the same thing.


The second paragraph is fine. Good luck out here!