Topic: "Do you know how it feels?"
Scorpio8569's photo
Thu 11/29/07 12:22 PM
Edited by Scorpio8569 on Thu 11/29/07 12:24 PM
"Do you know how it feels?"

Do you know how it feels,
to love and not be loved back,
to feel a heart so full of love,
fade and slowly turn black.

Do you know how it feels,
to think that you've found the one,
that could help end your pain,
only to find that your pain has only begun.

Do you know how it feels,
to look into somebodys eyes,
so deeply, only to see,
a soul filled only with lies.

Do you know how it feels,
to long to be held,
but the only arms that will hold you,
will take you to hell.

Do you know how it feels,
to live in a world of one night stands,
its hard to love a woman,
that already has a man.

Do you know how it feels,
to be so lonely that your heart turns numb,
so much that you can't even feel it beating,
it's something I have yet to overcome.



Stockdog6's photo
Thu 11/29/07 12:26 PM
Dude...you have got to let me set you up with someone...to much bleakness in your poem..Got the perfect one for you

Scorpio8569's photo
Thu 11/29/07 12:28 PM
Perfect one? no such thing, twice I've met a woman that was perfect for me, and twice she was already married, its torture, lol.

ph0enix87's photo
Thu 11/29/07 12:29 PM
been there bro.
still not sure if I'm all the way over it.

Stockdog6's photo
Thu 11/29/07 12:39 PM
This one is not married...34..blonde...pretty..and just looking for a descent man

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Thu 11/29/07 12:42 PM
You write very well...flowerforyou
We all experiance hurt in our lives.
We just have to brush our butts off and keep going... :wink:



Scorpio8569's photo
Thu 11/29/07 12:43 PM
Thanks, I have a few hundred on a cd somewhere, but I need to find a converter to tranfer the files, I dont have the program I wrote them with on my pc, lol.

TxsGal3333's photo
Thu 11/29/07 12:46 PM
Awesome write you do need to post more for sure.bigsmile




Also welcome to the site.flowerforyou

no photo
Thu 11/29/07 12:53 PM
interesting stuff....i think everyone knows how this feels.

Scorpio8569's photo
Thu 11/29/07 12:55 PM
I'm sure they do, it's just I usually make the topic the title and I dont make the title till I'm done, lol.

no photo
Thu 11/29/07 12:57 PM
the hardest part for me is naming my poem...i've been known to let Hanged read it first and let him give me a title for it...lmao.