Topic: Attraction
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Wed 11/28/07 03:19 PM
Edited by Niko2137 on Wed 11/28/07 03:20 PM
Attraction
by Niko

IN the air the smothers
IN the Food that chokes
IN the water the drowns me
In the fire that burns

I find you standing
Whispering to me
Soft insanities

Hallucination within a dream
Liquid magic, chain reactions
Voices in the wind

With my thoughts I find you
With my love I follow

Mindlessly pursuing
Mindlessly retreating
Letting go and dreaming

You, I fear
Your fascination
Seeking our colorful destructive actions
Embracing this obsessive radioactive
Attraction...

TxsGal3333's photo
Wed 11/28/07 03:24 PM
AWWWW very good girl welcome to the site and hope to
see you post more.flowerforyou

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Wed 11/28/07 03:28 PM
Thank you TsxGal!

polypeasant's photo
Wed 11/28/07 03:31 PM
Very nice. Good luck with your writing!flowerforyou

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Wed 11/28/07 03:45 PM
GOOD! WELCOME TO THE POETRY SECTION!!!
flowerforyou

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Wed 11/28/07 03:57 PM
Thank you everbody

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Wed 11/28/07 04:39 PM
Nice contribution to the poetry section, welcome to JSHflowerforyou