Topic: Turtle God
Turtlepoet78's photo
Mon 11/26/07 01:09 PM
Ok, I was gonna stop at the last two but it seems I gotta couple fans already..lol. So here is one of two old ones I'll post tonight & that'll be it for tonight. This ones called "Turtle God";^]

Well here I am again, surely not your lucky day~
the frenetic turtle (unable to live) with all joy moved astray
Longing for you lover, but you think me not in the same way~
even though we be two of a kind, you wish not with me to lay
Well I fefuse to keep this at bay, you're too concerned with love falling right into your lap~
never will you conceive that love must be learned, beleif at first sight is a perilous trap
Rather something you must study it's map, learn it's song lyric by lyric & never turn back
You fantasize from the beggining impression, nothing more than a (secret sexual obssesion)
A trendy condition, you think they're this or that when nothing about them has been mentioned~
like he's the perfect gentleman, though to love you & leave you be of his truest intentions
And you fly off the handle because you beleive your heart to be broken with desolate exposure~
neglecting to realize what it is I offer, genuine affection, limitless passion, both wisdom and pleasure
See, you shouldn't knock something until you've given it a try, I could be your buried treasure~
and once you've had me I gotcha, you would understand the necessity in this struggling endeavor
So this is my ode to you, the one who would oversee the turtle of her dreams~
I hark for you indefinatly, I promise your fixation of him is not what it seems
(Our love could shine bright like high beams), I would pamper you like an (angelic queen)~
come to know my (igneous passions) & learn to love this (boy in green)...


Turtlepoet78's photo
Mon 11/26/07 01:14 PM
Oooops, the other is an erotica poem so I guess this'll be the last 4 tonight;^]

peachiegirl28's photo
Mon 11/26/07 01:23 PM
flowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Mon 11/26/07 01:58 PM
Awwww very good indeed

Also welcome to the site hope to see more

Humm Erotic poems sshshshshsh last I checked we were all over
18 and can read those kinds and yes you can post those kind
here we tend to at times. Hehehehehe.bigsmile

Turtlepoet78's photo
Mon 11/26/07 02:03 PM
lol.. Thanks!! I held back the other one 'cause it said on the sticky rules no sexual content, did post it in the sex & dating forum though;^]

peachiegirl28's photo
Mon 11/26/07 02:34 PM
it was greatbigsmile

Dragoness's photo
Mon 11/26/07 02:45 PM
flowerforyou flowerforyou

GIRLYCHIC's photo
Wed 11/28/07 10:46 AM
Wow, I know Im a little late on commenting I loved this one as well...very nice It goes together so wellflowerforyou

Differentkindofwench's photo
Wed 11/28/07 11:12 PM
You have an interesting combo of young and old.
Makes me wonder of the male version of maiden, mother, and crone.