Topic: here's one of my poems......tell me what you think
poetwriter72's photo
Fri 11/23/07 02:20 PM


princess
i want to show you
all the love in my heart
even though were so far apart
i would get on my horse
and take the long journey to see u
fight off all the evil that threatends you

princess
other princes may bring you
diamonds and jewls
but i'm here to say
i'm here to defend thee
and to make the sacrfice to capture your love
i may have not slayed many dragons
but for you i will

princess
i may have my own wars to fight right now
but your vision is in my head
but may feel your all alone and sitting on your throne
just look across the distance and i will be there
on the otherside
holding a rose for thee
and together we can watch it grow
and when the war is won
i will bow before thee
and present my love and devotion

Dragoness's photo
Fri 11/23/07 02:23 PM
noway another dragonslayernoway J/K Niceflowerforyou

Differentkindofwench's photo
Fri 11/23/07 02:35 PM
Depends on what type of knight you truly would be for this princess. Words flow prettily, but deed of brave night and how you consistently present yourself with others and said princess, as well as self --- now there's the music to make a soul dance when played to the rhythm of each soul involved.

I agree with Dragoness though, I do truly feel for the dragons, as every knight seems to follow history simply because that is the norm of how to deal with dragons. Silly knights, dragon make excellent allies........

loosenut's photo
Fri 11/23/07 02:46 PM
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Dear--------

Last night i was lost in a world that i hardly ever see, except when i am with you. When we embraced our very spirits, beings, souls melded, blended, intertwined together.Yes, You remember, i know, even after all this time, my daily situations cannot overcome it. As i lay down to sleep at night, with my window cracked open to allow the easing of a gentle breeze,coming in also on the reflection of the moonlight is a reminder of how your love has illuminated my heart, my very inner being with this wonderous thing that tells me to the depths of all that is me,''i am love, embrace me,never let me go, i am the ultimate energy source that feeds your very soul.

It must be true, because i have never had such a feeling as this before. When you leave the room,a part of me leaves, when you enter the place wherever i am at, i could have my back turned, then know immediately that you are there. That is the connection that is there, the conection that i do not want ever to be broken.Without words we both know what each other is thinking, what each others needs are. i know that what we have is beyond price,yet i know too that it is fragile, that it must, must be nurtured in order to bloom into the most beautiful flower in GOD's flower garden.Something that will catch his eye, and he will say''yes,it is good, may it be forever!'' i sometimes wonder if i am in a dream, if so please do not wake me. As if we were in a dance to a music that moves us as one, because we were written for one another. I am honored to get the first, ongoing, and last dance with you.Kingdoms come, Kingdoms go, night follows day,may our coming and goings never be seperate, but together everlasting. And now for the simple thing...I love You.

shadow_princess's photo
Fri 11/23/07 02:54 PM
i thought it was good..im a writer too so right on

just_mary's photo
Fri 11/23/07 03:16 PM
love it knights in shining armor are hard to find these days

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Fri 11/23/07 05:32 PM
drinker Very good!
Welcome to the poetry section...flowerforyou