Topic: The Greatest man I ever knew
thunderbear1967's photo
Mon 11/19/07 09:02 PM
The Greatest man I ever knew is lost
his heart broken his dream shattered

The lies and pain have taken their toll

The greatest man I knew hides from the world
His past is more then he can take

His smile is hidden

The greatest man I knew does not smile anymore
She took the gift of love from him

so now he’s lost his faith

The Greatest man I knew cannot see anymore
The beauty in the world he liked to watch

The sky above him always seems so grey

The greatest man I ever knew has runaway
No more memories of her can he take

The pain is just to hard for him to take

The greatest man I ever knew has forgotten who he was
I know cause that man is me.

LAMom's photo
Mon 11/19/07 09:04 PM
Search deep within,,, for the man i see shines so bright
your heart lives,,, yesturday has past and today almost gone
live for the tomorrows,,, the beauty that surrounds ohhhhhhh bask in the glory of the sunshine,,,,

hugs to you flowerforyou

thunderbear1967's photo
Mon 11/19/07 09:10 PM
Thank you La Mom, I have just been trying to get her out of my mind and thought this was a good way to release her has it is effecting many aspects of my life, I cant even sing anymore has when I do I still see her watching me. I have been signed to sing as a national recording Artist and well her memories are holding me back.

My days start with this prayer

Lakota Prayer

Wakan Tanka, Great Mystery,
teach me how to trust
my heart,
my mind,
my intuition,
my inner knowing,
the senses of my body,
the blessings of my spirit.
Teach me to trust these things
so that I may enter my Sacred Space
and love beyond my fear,
and thus Walk in Balance
with the passing of each glorious Sun.

LAMom's photo
Mon 11/19/07 09:13 PM
Time will ease the pain,,, Trust in your heart and soul
it will guide you in life,,, Yes hard at times,,, Yet when
you listen closely the light is much brighter and the road
not so hard to travel on,,

Best of luck to you,,,

flowerforyou

pkh's photo
Tue 11/20/07 07:01 AM
very nice,time will heal you,continue to write your feeling it does help

no photo
Tue 11/20/07 07:15 AM
Thunderbear, Good Writing, and what a poignant description of the pain losing love can bring. You speak for us all. You said a lot.

Differentkindofwench's photo
Tue 11/20/07 07:44 AM
Sing out the pain, let the drums and guitar heal it.

Differentkindofwench's photo
Tue 11/20/07 07:47 AM
Oh PS incorporate the tears too......

mitakuye oyasin

thunderbear1967's photo
Thu 11/22/07 10:40 PM
thank you all. It is good to know that people do pay attention and listen to the thoughts. Wish all of you the best.

Respect

Thunder Bear