Topic: The Dream
Blueeyedtexan's photo
Mon 11/19/07 07:06 PM
The Dream.

I was sitting on the cliff one day.
When you walked up and said hey.
I could not believe my eyes, could it
really be, the man of my dreams standing
before me?

His eyes are so amazing,they sparkle in
the sun. Oh that smile just takes my breath
away. I want to speak,to say hello back,but
the words are stuck,they will not come out.

He smiles,and takes my hand,he tells me it's
alright that he understands.
He brushes my hair out of my eyes.
As I let out a big sigh.

His hands are so soft,they feel like silk
as they touch my skin,Oh the rush that I am
feeling from within.

We talk for a while on this beautiful sunny day.
All I can think about is how I don't want you to
go away.
At that moment it's like you read my mind.
You told me that it will all be fine.

Before the day came to an end,we were sitting
there holding hands. You reached in and gentley
kissed me. I thought wow he really likes me.

Right when he was fixing to kiss me again,that is when
the dream came to an end.

RICKG1961's photo
Mon 11/19/07 07:12 PM
Dream's r nice and some
day it might come true
some time i wish mine did.

it was a nice write
well wroth reading.

Blueeyedtexan's photo
Mon 11/19/07 07:38 PM
Thank you. flowerforyou

Wolfeyes58's photo
Mon 11/19/07 08:57 PM
Those are the moments you wish you could stay asleep aren't they? Very nice poem blueeyes.

LAMom's photo
Mon 11/19/07 08:58 PM
flowerforyou flowerforyou

Dreams are so incredible ,,,

Blueeyedtexan's photo
Mon 11/19/07 09:59 PM

Those are the moments you wish you could stay asleep aren't they? Very nice poem blueeyes.


I would love to stay asleep for that one.:) Dreams are very wonderful most of the time. I wish everyone sweet dreams.flowerforyou

pkh's photo
Tue 11/20/07 06:58 AM
a sweet and beautiful dream