Topic: Can this all be what is real??? | |
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Sad times have come and gone
and here I sit alone Thinking back to a time where I felt I belonged Only to realize I was sittting upon a false throne My love was so strong that my minds eye was clouded the truth that my hearts desire had long moved on to another place So here I sit to ponder the future While healing from what now is a bitter past Is love real or pure fantasy Can others realize the depth of me Did I chose a broken rose or am I the one that is stricken Can that feeling ever return or was what I desire an unreachable height Is there anyone who desires oneness from two or is it a punishment to want more from an incapable place Not one for prose I let my heart bleed to you Is the hope where now sits solitude? |
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Hope always, wanting oneness from two-we all want the same thing. Believe and when you're ready it will come. Keep writing.
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I really enjoyed this....except for the THRONE part of it.
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very nice write always have hope
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How about Standing upon a false plain ?
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very nice
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I think we all have been there. Just a part of life I guess. I hope it can be found. I'll sure keep looking. There has to be someone out there that is close to my dream.
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Hope, faith and Love lives within us all,,, Love your soul and love will find you,,,, Hugs to you
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