I live in a place between love and confusion
To be without you the only illusion

I don't know how one is to deal with such feelings
Without you I cry with you I could jump to the ceiling

To some this may make absolutely no sense
But I believe that they have no point of reference

For if they saw what I felt from just a glimpse of your eyes
They to would know how it beat one up on their insides

I wandered for so long until I stumbled on your path
And now it would seem you have slipped from my grasp

Enlightened I shall stay though until the bitter end
If you are reading this you know in my heart you will always be more than a friend

Of course she is, she always will be, Chris

i like it ob

Thanks for posting Puffins and yeahitsmeok
Good night

Beautifully written, Chris, I hope things will work out for you in the future.

Hugs (((( Chris )))))

Yes she is reading this,,, My love to you

This is the most beautiful, and best thing Ive ever read of yours, truely poetic. I would not change one word...for it makes perfect sense.

thanks for writing this, it made me cry.

Thanks for posting Marie , La mom and pkd

I love it when you post in my threads Katie
You always say exactly what you think good or bad, I always enjoy your critisism and I am glad you enjoyed it


Thanks you everyone for posting

I like this OL

For if they saw what I felt from just a glimpse of your eyes
They to would know how it beat one up on their insides

I wandered for so long until I stumbled on your path
And now it would seem you have slipped from my grasp

Enlightened I shall stay though until the bitter end
If you are reading this you know in my heart you will always be more than a friend




a terrible thing to not be with the one you love no matter what the reason is.. i'm sure she know's everything your telling her

Ohhhh Chris my heart goes out to you my dear friend.
This is beautiful coming from a beautiful soul. I guess
there are things in life that just dont make sense even
to me these days. But I do understand your hurt you are
and awesome person indeed.

LUV IT CHRIS. SHE'LL BE BACK

Thank you all for posting

I too hope she gets to read this most beautiful heart felt poem.....Great poem my dear friend......

Thanks for posting feral

i hear ya

Thanks for posting ak0

Beautifully wrote, and I'm sure she sees.