Be gentle please. Let me know if anything needs added or omitted. I have not gotten much luck on here. . .

You just joined. So, of course you haven't had any good responses yet.

You could use one full body photo.

The essay is okay, but... I'd eliminate the first two sentences. The opening sentence is a cliche and as a disclaimer it is in the category of "No chit." People understand the children come first. I'd eliminate the baby daddy drama statement as well. It's unnecessary to point that out and whoever you meet is going to decide that for himself anyway...

I'd also add a bit about the type of man you seek. Welcome and good luck!

Hi, In all of your pictures, you look like you are looking down, so I would delete all of them and maybe add just a touch of makeup, not much and let your hair down, also when you take new pictures, smile showing your beautiful smile with your teeth showing, you will get result's....hope this helps.

Hmmm, I am not interested in you. I have already raised a family so I am not interested in doing so again, unless it is something special.

As far as I am concerned your pictures are fine. The gist I get from your profile is that you are tired of being a mom. I understand how that could come into play when you are facing the world by yourself. I understand that your children are very important to you and I should hope so. But, There must be something about you that you want to share with someone?

From the way you listed your interests it causes me to believe that you are an writer and artist. That your children have gotten in the way of your passions. I feel they are going to get in the way of any relationship that could happen.

You are open to a range of activities but that gives me the sense that you will do anything to land any man that will help you take care of your offspring. There is nothing wrong with that but it is not something that I desire, been there done that.

You are young and cute. You may be a beautiful person but you have not convinced me of that by what you have shared. Let me see the real you. Share something that is totally you. Children grow up and leave you. When all that is left is you, what is there?

I hope this helps.