Topic: A poem I wrote for my wife who died last year...
Dez929's photo
Thu 11/17/16 07:21 AM
I miss the way you laugh and the way you smile
I wanna feel and see you even only for a while
I miss your kiss and I miss your embrace
That whenever you do it you'll leave me at a daze
What I miss most is how you made me feel loved
If I can be with you again, I'd give up everything I have
If I was given a day, you know what I would do?
I'll hold you every second and tell a million I love you

One more day for me to feel loved
One more day to remember what I used to have
One more day to feel your warm embrace
One more day that I can kiss your face
And if that one day will come to an end
I'll feel the pain and loneliness all over again

I'm jealous of the angels who gets to be with you
Jealous of everything they do that I can't do
Until the day that I'll be able to leave this world
I hope you'll be waiting even if I get too old
Only then would I ease and forget all these pain
Because I'll be given a chance to be with you again

TxsGal3333's photo
Thu 11/17/16 07:29 AM
My heart goes out to you for your loss may the angels bring you messages within your dreams of her gentle touch~~~flowerforyou


Beautiful poem~~~:cry:



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Thu 11/17/16 07:31 AM
Edited by lu_rosemary on Thu 11/17/16 07:56 AM
Beautiful poem.
God Bless your angel!
May she Rest In Peace.
A good heart has stopped beating, a good soul ascended to heaven.

nice_guy's photo
Thu 11/17/16 08:18 AM
I read ur poem, and I am so sad now, and I can never comprehend the pain u are going through.
Your words are sad enough, to bring tears in my eyes. I dont know you, but I can feel ur pain.
I am sorry brother. I would offer my prayers, but I have sinned enough to know that my prayers are worth nothing. I hope that no one has to lose their loved one. There is no pain, bigger than that.

The only piece of advice, I can give is, Time is a great healer. Let it work on ur pain. The hole will never be fulfilled, but somehow, i hope you find strength and hope to live with it.

with best wishes
Rocky

inni_dreamz's photo
Thu 11/17/16 09:49 AM
Beautiful ~ so very sorry for your loss.

Dez929's photo
Thu 11/17/16 05:56 PM
Thanks...

Dez929's photo
Thu 11/17/16 05:59 PM
Thanks brother... Head is still a mess but trying my best to be ok

Dez929's photo
Fri 11/18/16 07:29 PM
Her 1st death anniversary would be this Nov 21, 2016... It'll just be a year but it felt like it was just yesterday and felt that I'm alone for years...

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Sat 11/19/16 06:24 AM
Very nice poem.
I could feel your pain.
Sincere deep condolences. flowers

Dez929's photo
Sat 11/19/16 07:42 AM
Thanks

yruyrm's photo
Tue 03/14/17 08:27 AM
Beautiful

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Wed 03/15/17 12:06 PM
Very moving... I'm so sorry for your loss.

PacificStar48's photo
Thu 03/16/17 09:59 AM
Beautiful tribute.
Captured a lot of the feelings of being a surviving is spouse. I was only a couple years older than you so this ground I tread.
The good news is you do eventually feel like your heart has the great capacity for love and it can love again. Not as a memorial but as a celebration.
The heart has more than one chamber for a reason and if she loves you half as much as you seem to love her as your angel my belief she will put love in your path when you are ready.

Dez929's photo
Tue 04/11/17 09:34 AM
Tnx