Topic: Eternity...
greeneyedlady42's photo
Wed 11/08/06 09:11 PM
The whisper of your breath upon my skin,
As we're enveloped in the night-
Shadows of love dance on the walls,
In the glow of the candles light.

Your hands on my body, reaching my soul-
Those places hidden from the world,
Visions of our sweat glazed skin
And you tell me I'm "your girl".

To feel your fingers interlocked in mine,
In passion that knows no bounds-
Caught up in the love we share
Its sights and tastes and sounds.

Where you and I are joined as one
All we have is this time to share
This precious loving feeling
as a perfectly melded pair

Basking in loves heated afterglow -
Tangled in the sheets
With my head upon your chest,
Feeling your heart as it beats...

God made me for you my love,
and He made you for me
And I will pledge my love to you
Til the end of eternity.

michael1313's photo
Wed 11/08/06 09:27 PM
wow...are you hot in here? or is it just you?...
melted my keys, as I read these,
you know just what to say,
to feel th' heat in your words,
you taste of honey,to fill my nights dream,
loving arms enfolding my hearts dream,
reading those words brought you to my soul,
and hope springs in my lonely heart............M.

Jimi366's photo
Wed 11/08/06 09:54 PM
Greeneyedlady,
That was a beautiful poem you wrote. It was very sensual
and I love the imagery like when you write of candles
and shadows of love dancing on the walls.

greeneyedlady42's photo
Thu 11/09/06 06:06 AM
Thank you Michael and Jimi-
Seems like there is always so much from the heart to write about.
I usually write from experience or about waiting for the experience-
This one Im still waiting for......

no photo
Thu 11/09/06 06:20 AM
Greeneyes. Your endering feelings of magic times,
Brings me to my knee's to say?
Thank you for your beautiful rhymes
And I hope you find this love one day?







greeneyedlady42's photo
Thu 11/09/06 07:16 AM
Awwww you're such a sweet heart!
Thank you Iam4u...
Theres always hope!