Topic: Midnight Love
Jimi366's photo
Wed 11/08/06 05:27 PM
Baby you're my world.
You are everything to me.
You are the definition of a woman.
I was this sad and lonely man
til' you came along. Lover,
you set me free. I could
feel the foundation of love
being built in my heart.
I could feel the beating
of yours, I knew then and there
that we were meant to be
from the very start.
Love's passion is what
you and I share. I won't
live in a world where you
aren't there. When I dream
at night I see you. You
take me to places so far away!
When I wake I see your lovely face.
I thank God for you as I wake and pray.
You got my attention the first time
I looked into your eyes. You
captured me with that first kiss.
When we made love for the first time
I knew no other love could ever
be like this. No other love
could ever do. Sweet beautiful lady
we were destined for each other.
Lover I only want you.


no photo
Wed 11/08/06 05:32 PM
So beautiful Jimi

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Wed 11/08/06 05:50 PM
You are my man
so good and so true
My respect you gain
each day I am with you
Youth and Virility
Vigor and Reality
Passion and Pain
You bring it all out in me
Beyond the Beauty
on to the inside
You see my soul there
bare for you
the lasting beauty within me
is all I have to offer
Youth and Beauty will
all fade in time
but I still want you always
That special look in your eyes
the way you see me
the way you swagger into a room
when you reach for my hand
unexpectedly landing a kiss
as you stand behind me
When we snuggle together
and watch out children play
Over the years they'll grow
and here we'll be
Aging, Enjoying
Laughing, Crying
Celebrating our 5oth Anniversary
My sweet baby
so good and true
I love you more each day
that I am with you...

Ontario's photo
Wed 11/08/06 05:53 PM
That is soooooooooooooooooooooooo sexy...!

Jimi366's photo
Wed 11/08/06 05:54 PM
Sweet Country Girl,
I bet you could read
the phone book and
make it somehow erotic.
What you wrote was so
beautiful.

Ontario's photo
Wed 11/08/06 05:57 PM
No dude it was, soooooooooooooooooooooooooooo, sexy........?

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Wed 11/08/06 06:01 PM
I was looking for a number
and what did I see
I let my fingers do the walking for me
Page after page
turning gently
licking my fingers
cause the pages
well,
they stick together you see
turning and yearnig,
your number I seek
yellow pages
white pages I explore
where did you go
I'll find you
you'll see


Jimi366's photo
Wed 11/08/06 06:04 PM
Sweet Country Girl,
You did it! You wrote
about the phone book and
got my juices flowing.
Your writing is so
fucking sexy.
Ontario is right.

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Wed 11/08/06 06:09 PM
Thank You...
for your gracious praise
guess I havent lost it after all...
had a few days where I couldnt write a thing...

Ontario's photo
Wed 11/08/06 06:10 PM
Yeah...missed you...!

michael1313's photo
Wed 11/08/06 06:14 PM
what I see is good poetry to me,
from the heart,from the start,
the true you's do I see,
this is what poetry is to me,
not hackin' and spewin'
jaws slack or chewin'
or not even rhymes at all,
for if you fight in your poetry of love,
how can you hear th' worlds above?
sweet words to my heart,
are from the heart,and the art,
of making Love thru Rhyme,
thyme after time,gives love time,
to dance on th' winds of Fantastic Loves Rhyme.......M.

michael1313's photo
Wed 11/08/06 06:15 PM
my lonely Heart Thanks You All....M

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Wed 11/08/06 07:30 PM
Here I sit
an Amish maiden
on the porch
I'm a churnin and makin
sweet butter for you
to spread on your bread
It'll melt in your mouth
this sweet butter i churn
graspin the pole
goin up and down
slow at first
till it thickens up
faster and fastr
gettin there now
almost done
sweat on my brow
hard work this is
pumpin this pole
perspiration dripping
down my dress
into the hallow of my back

churnin this butter
in the hot sun
hope you enjoy it
the sweetness unequal
to any you've eaten
better eat it now
spread it on your bread
just for you
made with these hands

escapedlunatic's photo
Wed 11/08/06 07:46 PM
: )

michael1313's photo
Wed 11/08/06 07:48 PM
oh,,,THANK YOU FOR THIS SWEET BUTTER
TO SPREAD ON MY BREAD FROM YOU,

You feed My Lonely Soul with your heart,
and thank you "Sweet" maiden for this,your art,
you lift my heart,with your fine art,
and my heart is still opened to YOU,
your poems so sweet,still defeat,
Lone wolves wild nights call out for you,
my cat still speaks, to me my dreams,
and he told me just what to do,
play th' games,stay th' sames,
and show th true me to you,
a Friend I'll be,for all to see,
hope is getting my Honor from You...

This "Butter is fine,oh,Maidens Rhyme,
Thanx for feeding my heart,
this is th true you,
th' one who I knew true,
the true you I knew from th' start,
THANK YOU From th' bottom of my heart.......M.