Topic: Closure
GCLIFE's photo
Thu 11/08/07 12:54 PM
CLOSURE

Palpitations of anger thrust venomously
Soluble conclusion yet to be retained
There lies no closure in this bed of sleeping dogs
My feelings raped, shredded and discarded

I hate you like the poisonous fumes which clutch at your throat
I feel no remorse for this hardened stone
For there lies no closure in this room where clothes hang dry
My soul too - has been toxically stricken

You pillage through my hard earned reputation
Nullifying my reality while passifying your delusions
There lies no closure in this place where things just be
My stained glory cries out for a fresh coat of vindication

You sit there within eyes distance - idle and apathetic
Not a care in the world concerns you except you
There lies no closure in this house of pain
My ocean sized depression tainted by your debris

Your salty crocodile tears trickle down your face with precision
Spreading those burning droplets of false propaganda
There lies no closure in this land of live and let be
Murdering the good will of others is all you see

You amputate the hands of those that feed you
Plead mercy to the wanderers that fall steeply in your path
There lies no closure in this world of blindness
You strike those with conviction leaving them bound to decay

You horrible irritant that I find so dispicable
Stand up and show yourself to the others
Make them see your ill kept devices
Let them know of your diabolical intentions

You act like you know not what you do
Sullen and grey as the world has been bad to you
There lies no closure in an era of ignorance and reprieve
You steal from my sincerity and devour it with glee

Why are you late for the misfortune you employ
Horror should come sweetly to a bludgeoned soul like yours
I fear that you observe from far away
Watching the innocent commit acts of grey

You are branded by the evil ... it swallows you whole
Grasping fibers in the brain and not letting go
There lies no closure when one doth protest too much
There lies little satisfaction ... using the world as your crutch

There lies no closure for those you have exposed.









dchatwin's photo
Thu 11/08/07 01:02 PM
Wow that totally brought back memories of the ex fiance lol... *thumbs up*

GCLIFE's photo
Thu 11/08/07 01:12 PM
thanks man. :smile:

no photo
Thu 11/08/07 01:41 PM
*standing ovation*


DAMN!

GCLIFE's photo
Thu 11/08/07 01:47 PM
Thank you Storm. It comes from a dark place.

no photo
Thu 11/08/07 02:25 PM
I, too, know of dark places within..where wounds wont heal, my heart wrenching cries go unheard..they echo past my very core, where I once dared to tread.

Tameka's photo
Thu 11/08/07 03:09 PM
gc - definitely makes me feel your pain... wish i could kiss it and make it better... but it doesnt work that way....

Godschosengirl's photo
Thu 11/22/07 06:29 AM
excellent...keep writing.bigsmile